Eternal Characters

This took two days, but it was worth it!

These are all characters in my original story, Eternal (real original title, I know ) 

You can read the first chapter of Eternal here:  Eternal (Storm) - Chapter 1
Chapter 1
There's a storm rolling in?
A hoodied figure laying on a blanket underneath a remote bridge put down the book she was reading and inhaled the musty scent of the coming thunderstorm from the east. The weather forecaster she'd overheard on the radio earlier that morning hadn't said anything about the possibility of storms for the day, making it a highly suspect event. Nonetheless, she felt prepared. She'd been waiting for that potential moment for a few months.
Well. That wasn't entirely true.
She'd prepared for this moment for a few months on Earth. Back in her native world, called Soharana by its inhabitants, she'd been raised to prepare for what was coming her entire life, from as early as she could remember. Every member of age in her family had followed the same path before her, and  it was finally her turn to show them what she had learned and put her skills to use.
She wen

Comments always appreciated, thanks all!

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